Even ace pilots had to start somewhere; Cid's break was at the start of the Wutaian war. He was still just a kid, like so many who ended up caught up in the fighting, but sometimes it takes a kid t...
(#) Negative_Creep 2006-06-07 06:23:46 AMGod yes. Yes yes YES. A well-written Cid story, and one that doesn't have him screwing fucking Vincent to boot! Very nice original idea, good clean writing style - I like it a lot.
There ARE a few nitpicks with your language here and there, but that's all they are, nitpicks. Keep up the good work.