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You Should Have Known Better
2 reviewsThis is a tiny one-shot for another LJ challenge. Wakka's subconscience berades him for past actions involving Lulu, but now has a chance to make things right. This is me assuming things during h...
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You Should Have Known Better
(#) helluin 2006-06-07
Awww. Gack, yes, I remember boys doing that with my braids. This sounds very very plausible for poor Wakka.You Should Have Known Better
(#) fyre_byrd 2006-06-09
I really enjoyed this. It's very sweet, but I don't find it too sentimental or the ending too abrupt. I really enjoyed the way that Wakka showed his affections as a young person by behaving badly. That strikes me as something he would do.
I love how he feels betrayed by the way Chappu and Lulu form a connection and I like the way he characts Lulu's changes of mood so closely.
I enjoyed reading this.
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