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Contest!

by Vampirechick1159 5 Reviews

Just a little friendly rivalry. :)

Category: Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2011/09/11 - Updated: 2011/09/12 - 607 words

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  • Contest!

    (#) vampiredude1159 2011-09-12 06:31:19 PM

    Ben totally wins.

    Author's response

    STFU YOUR ARGUMENT IS INVALID.
  • Contest!

    (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2011-09-12 11:18:08 PM

    So very hard to say which is better from my point of view. They are both great.

    I love the description for both... It's so hard to say which is preferable when it's so short though.

    Honestly though I would say yours is better because it makes me curious as to what was going on before since it starts with 'I told you not to come here'... That line makes me want to know what was going on!

    But both rocked.

    Author's response

    Yay! :D I feel all mysterious. xDD Thanks so much for the feedback, it helps. Glad to know people besides Ben are reading this! :D
  • Contest!

    (#) Whovian-lily404 2011-09-14 03:57:10 AM

    Ben, sorry mate, but Lauren wins XD

    (speaking to Lauren now)
    I loved both, but you won :3 i liked it a bit more.

    Ben, I'm gonna say this publicaly so that you know that if you do ANYTHING bad to Lauren, I'm gonna fly up from Oz to pound you to a pulp, 'k? lol

    Author's response

    YAY! :DDDDD

    Awwwww. :3 You're being a good friend 'n stuff. I LOVE YOU. :D
  • Contest!

    (#) vampiredude1159 2011-09-16 09:39:01 AM

    Fine... I accept defeat... for now.

    Author's response

    :D VICTORY!
  • Contest!

    (#) misterjess 2011-11-22 10:10:55 PM

    Laurens' was better, sorry Ben. n_n

    Author's response

    Aha, I know right? I killed him.

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