(#) red_jacobson 2011-09-13Interesting enough for a one shot, but far more telling than showing. I can understand wanting to get rid of a plot bunny, but I think it would need a great deal more fleshing out to stand on it's own as a story. As it is, this is mainly a series of events happening to nameless people that we don't care about, and are given no reason to care about them.
Sorry Dr, but not some of your best work
(#) NeverTooOld 2011-09-13Be careful what you wish for...you might get it.
Kinda creepy with the "Molly Plan" to out breed everyone else into 'Purity' and the almost inevitable slide into degeneracy through isolation.
I liked how the Goblins worked things out in the end, legally and in strict accordance to signed contracts. It's not their fault that the Wizard's can't read and understand the contracts they signed.
Good One-Shot, could be fleshed out into a longer story, but stands on its own well enough.
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