Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > I'm Not Okay, I Promise

wishes do come true, way better than i expected

by imnotokay 1 Reviews

well this is the first chapter where gerard is directly involved!!!! yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayy!!!!!!!!!!!!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Gerard Way - Published: 2006/06/08 - Updated: 2006/06/08 - 130 words

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  • I'm Not Okay, I Promise

    (#) Dyakatte 2006-12-30 07:22:03 AM

    hi i was just wondering... are you obsessed with gerard or something because this story has no credible plot whatsoever. i can understand if you wanted to finish that part quickly because i have done a bad part in a story myself just to get it over with but i cant imagine gerard going online, meeting some girl and suddenly falling in love with her. it makes no sense to me. the basic idea behind this fic could be a good story but you need to take some more time with your work and expand it. e.g you could have a chapter where gerard is talking about his artwork or his comic or something. i am sorry if im flaming you a little but i do believe that you have potential as a writer.

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