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Harry Potter and the Emerald Coven
(#) LabRat 2011-10-07
You know, this is the first story I've read where Gabrielle is merely Harry's plaything. Sure, it's what she wants, and I notice that Harry obliges her, but I like that he does it out of love for her, instead of just because he can like in most fics with a similar plot device.
I should say I found myself laughing when you mentioned Hermione's list. Leave it to her to actually have one written out. I certainly hope this isn't one of those 'sleeps with Harry, but ends up running back to Ron' deals.
I don't really care whether Ginny ends up with Harry or not, so long as a love potion isn't involved. I'll admit, I do find stories hilarious where Ginny gets Harry, but Ron doesn't get Hermione, because Ginny actually helps Harry get her too.Author's response
Why thank you, Rowling has made it abundantly clear that Harry's greatest ability is his ability to love, and that's definitely a central theme to this story.
As far as Hermione goes, we'll just have to wait and see ;).
Also yeah, love potions suck, absolutely terrifying.Harry Potter and the Emerald Coven
(#) irishdaddy0204 2011-10-18
You have got to continue and finish this story. I know the characters are a bit OOC but WTF, it is AU right? I could see Hermione compiling a list for a bed-buddy/best friend though I can't really see her continue to pine after Ron once she gets a taste. I find this well written and a decent amount of plot amidst the fun! Great job and I look forward to more!Author's response
Thanks!Harry Potter and the Emerald Coven
(#) simplysanity 2011-10-22
I can't seem to find your update, But I'm really enjoying this story so far. I look forward to seeing the Christmas party, and Harry and Gabrielle going to the burrow. Please keep up the good work.Author's response
I was just fixing some typos, though I am working on chap7, I'm just having some trouble ending it.Harry Potter and the Emerald Coven
(#) traubexp 2011-10-22
Great story!
Finally a good mix off smut and story-telling.
PS: Sry about my rating, wrong button and damn i can't seem to change it.Harry Potter and the Emerald Coven
(#) loginanout 2011-11-09
I hope mione doesnt go running to Ron when he finds out about themAuthor's response
Hermione is a stronger woman than that I think.Harry Potter and the Emerald Coven
(#) Osma77 2012-08-29
Harry's mind locked.
For a very long time.
This was great use of imagery, I can imagine feeling the same way. Someone as incredible as Hermione wanting to not only share her secret feelings (something I can sort of see as a quid pro quot), but actively wanting to test them out with him. A week previous he would have freaked out far more, his best friend, a girl he was embarresed to be attracted to because of a precieved taboo, wanted to be actively sexual with him, plain old Harry. That would lock up anyone, even with a week of sex under their belt.
Personally really hoping herm becomes his wife, but enjoying the story thourally in any case.
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