(#) jesusweekes 2011-10-02jfkerefrkbvjrsf skjbne so perf
Favourite chapter so far. The extent to which you stress their lust, their /need/for each other is amazing. And I'm excited for more now, are they gonna get caught, whatever happened to Ray, what will the repercussions be etc
Also "Jamia. A calm, still and secure pond, she'd been pushed into the back of his mind by the raging river that was Gerard's existence" I loved that comparison, it perfectly captured how Frank seems to feel his relationship with Jamia is mundane and even boring compared to how much he needs Gerard.
Can't wait for more. xo
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