"Hush " Frank whispered again as Gerards soft snores resumed , his voice cracking slightly. He picked his bag up and tiptoed from the room , closing the door softly behind him.
(#) Unicorns-are-real 2011-10-02 12:54:34 PMThis was a very short but powerful piece of writing, boy was it powerful O.o
Personally, this has a great potential to be a really good story, you should continue with it :)
This was really well planned and very atmospheric, I'm impressed :) Please do continue with this, it was epic!
- Sara xoxo
ps- also I love that song, it is amazing! ;)
Author's responseThank you so much your review made my day ^.^
I don't think it's gonna be a story though because it would be very similiar to my other story Love Isn't always fair
I know me too it's the most amazing song Wow ^.^