(#) RekkanoKuuryu 2007-01-03I liked your style. It's sorta what I want mine to be like ^^ and Gaanaru is my favorite pair. And your story actually had a pretty decent plot. Some sentences were random (just a few) and it sort of twisted the flow of the paragraphs, but it didn't really affect the overall story. ^^ keep writing!!
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