Second note. Please read
Hello again! Thank you to the people who reviewed, I appreciate it a lot.
I'm think I'm gonna re-write this, how does that sound? You change a few things, make it all flow.... It'll probably still be very much like this but just different? Does that sound okay?
Buuuuut, I think I'm gonna really think about it and plan it out so it's really good for those of you who read because I was to please all you lovely people.
Just let me know your thoughts.. And oh! Is there anything you'd like to change about this story? I'd like to know so please tell me. I still want it to be a Frerard though.. But yea, let me know what you are all thinking!