(#) GrantLarceny 2011-10-20good start couldve used a bit more editing
pls disregard the lack of editing in this review
Author's responseThanks glad you approve. Self editing is a little difficult, most of the things I miss I do so because I dont realize their wrong. I'm having trouble getting a beta and until then I'm stuck with fixing my own mistakes but I'm trying to improve.
Sign up to review this story.