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Chapter Five- The Revelation

by claire13524 1 Reviews

Harry stopped himself suddenly, realising what he had almost let slip. But had he said too much already. A simple look at the face before him gave the answer instantaneously.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy - Characters: Harry,Lupin - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2011/10/23 - Updated: 2012/03/03 - 4517 words

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  • Harry Potter and unfamiliar power

    (#) Hippothestrowl 2012-03-06 12:31:52 PM

    Again, interesting story but overload of unnecessary detail.This entire chapter is basically a lengthy description of Harry having a bowl of soup with Ginny flirting again; another vision; then let's get Harry's kit off again and into the bath so I find myself skipping. The story plot is OK but the telling of it needs more experience I think.

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