Harry stopped himself suddenly, realising what he had almost let slip. But had he said too much already. A simple look at the face before him gave the answer instantaneously.
(#) Hippothestrowl 2012-03-06 12:31:52 PMAgain, interesting story but overload of unnecessary detail.This entire chapter is basically a lengthy description of Harry having a bowl of soup with Ginny flirting again; another vision; then let's get Harry's kit off again and into the bath so I find myself skipping. The story plot is OK but the telling of it needs more experience I think.