(#) ReddyDevil 2011-10-26 12:40:28 AM
I've only just started reading this story, and am up to chapter 40, but i just wanted to say a couple of things...
1. when i first saw the amount of chapters, i was like, wow...this might be going nowhere for a long time, but i dont think that it is. I haven't been bored reading this yet, but maybe coz i kinda like long fanfics and stories.
2. Ha, do you like McFly??? Im only asking coz the name of the story is a lyric from Star Girl, and you've used a line from One For The Radio, and also there is (though he doesn't seem to be anything like him) a Danny. XD I'm having fun just reading and going: "Oh!! McFly reference! AH! There's another one!" XD
3. I've noticed a couple of little typos and stuff. That's okay, Im not too fussed about that, coz i know there is still a couple in my stories when i upload my chapters, no matter how hard i try to find and get rid of them. Just, if it really worried you and you wanted to get rid of them, I could edit chapters for typos if you wanted. I wouldn't change anything, just typos. And Im reliable, so I'd do it fast. It's just that Im really good at English and often edit stories for my friends and stuff. But you don't have to accept my offer. Just putting it out there so you know.
Anyway, keep up the good work so far! (i'll probs review again sometime when i eventually catch up)