(#) monstrice901 2011-10-27oh, god - poor Gerard. It's really weird how he remembers stuff I think. And I'm amazed you can pull this off - I'd be completely stumped if I tried to write it but your story is very realistic. But then, I'm probably not the best judge 'cos I've never had to deal with a similar situation. I love it anyway so please put up the next chapter soon!
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-10-27The beginning of this chapter was very sweet, especially Frank's hopefulness.
But the end of that chapter made my heart clench. The whole dream sequence had quite a supernatural feel and Gerard not wanting to be alone was just so...erg, poor Gerard. I love this story so much.
- This is amazing, and very beautifully written, I love how you've taken the time to set up the situation that Gerard is in, and the contrast between his dreamworld and reality. I can sense that this is only going to get more heartwrenching, and that I'll probably be crying by the end.
I look forward to you updating ^-^
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