(#) Vengefulscout 2011-11-12OMGEE! TIS AMAZING!
I have to do Of Mice and Men for english. Our exams is on one of the characters (Either Curley's Wife or Crooks) I am not looking forward to it!
Love the story!
Author's responseYeAH i had to do mine on Curleys Wife but we did a practise on on Crooks. Some people say shes a slut but I felt sorry for her . :( and don't worry about doning the essay it'll be over before you know it. :)
(#) SatelliteHeart 2011-11-12Poor Mikey. Even though he was never really a part of the story, other thna being mentioned by Gerard, I feel so sorry for him. It's so sad that he died But you wrote it very well. And I feel so sorry for Gerard, too. I mean, the poor guy needs a break. Frank better be good to him and help him. And not break his heart or anything, not that I think he would. Anyways, I love this. It's amazing. But - no offence - do you think maybe there could be a little more Ray in in the story? Or maybe fit in Bob somehow? If you can't, I get it. I know it can be really hard to fit in characters right in the middle of a story. But anyways, I love this so much, it's amazing.
Author's responseWell, as it happens I was considering bringing Ray back into the story soon (Obviously I won't tell you how, so you'll just have to read and find out) and now you've said that I think I will. Ray always makes me smile, so hopefully he could bring some light to this rather sad story.. But as for Bob.. hmmm I haven't planned on putting him in the story, but later on I may have to make up a character like I made up Paul, so perhaps I could just use Bob instead? You'll have to wait and see!
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-11-12Gah, this was so amazing. I agree, the fro man needs to make an appearance :) Poor Mikey though, and he wasn't even really in the story.
Please please update soon.
And i have to do a controlled assessment on Macbeth :/ I HATE SHAKESPEARE. Actually i'm thankful he added the word llama to the dictionary but it is unnecessary to talk likest thoust so nout can understand ye.
Author's responseWaahh I have to start leaning shakespear next. :'( Hmmm but I had no idea he added the word llama.. interesting..
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2011-11-13this is purely AMAZING!! its like you can feel, see, and hear what they're all gong through. just amazing.
ps i have macbeth controlled assessment to do soon D: and last term we had a writing and speaking+listening controlled assessment in the space of two fucking weeks :| it was literally hell. good luck though (:
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