This is what I wrote for one of my Year 9 assessments and I got a B. Give it a read?
lol - it's told from a coffee cups POV! I wondered what was up! This was really good - can't believe you only got a B. Loved it. :)
thanks xD we were told to write from a strange point of view...but now my teachers suspicions of my mental health disorders have been confirmed xD I am, in fact, completely insane
This was awesome! coffee cups POV ha ha brilliant, you definitely deserved an A++
Seriously i loved it.
I'm in yr 10 and we're doing Macbeth, this sounds waaaay more fun.
I did Macbeth in year six so I know how boring it is :) we did this in response to The Boy In Striped Pyjamas, which is written from a strange POV in that it was written in the third person of a nine year old boy xD
(#) xXLaylaxX 2011-11-16 09:47:10 PM
Yay you're back :D
This was great, even though the cup like died in the end. And yes you should continue your old stories.
So glad your life is back on track =D
(#) Betty305 2011-11-20 09:25:52 AM
Yay!!! I can´t believe you´re back!! So happy about that, This was awesome I love it! >< so glad you are ok =) ! I think you should continue your old stories please
finish worst of both worlds!!!!!!