"I think you've grown soft."
(#) PartyPoison 2011-12-22 11:53:02 AMSorry for not reviewing sooner, didn’t think you would miss me.
This chapter was not a disappointment, at least to me. But if you think the next one will be better then I am excited for it. My mind has futilely tried to come up with ways this story could end. Of course the chances of one of them being correct are low because it is still too early to know all the factors that will come in at the end. I will tell you some of my thoughts on this story anyways, simply because of a lack of anything else to do at this moment.
I find it hard to predict the actions of killers like the Ryan you have created. Capable of something close to affection, shown by his relationship with Molly, but still very calculated and cold towards most of the humankind. His mind set is twisted and hard to understand but intriguing to try and figure out. I am thinking that it depends on how far Brendon will go with his ‘Hurt self to get with Ryan’ plan and how it affects Ryan (I am looking forward to reading that) Also, if the two do hook up then how will it effect everyone else. Things also depend on who gets kidnapped, tortured, and most likely killed next.
It’s going to be hard to actually figure out how this story ends. There are too many variables. I have a feeling you are going to do something completely unexpected yet wonderful like you always do. Who knows, maybe Adam will go insane if/when Ryan and Brendon get together and kill everyone and that will be the end of that.