- An interesting start to the story. Don't you hate hte odd things that happen when different magic uses intersect and interact in peculiar ways (I'd wager that attempting to analyze those interactions is right up there with quantum mechanics and other obstruse exercises). Anyway, it will be interesting to see where he is and who, and what, he meets up with. Depending on just what happens while he's back in time, if/when he returns to his normal time, life could get very interesting indeed.
- "Where's the beef?", I mean, over a year and still only one chapter? This has too much potential to just drop. You have a believable Harry and an interesting plot, now tell us more! I want to see how he copes with this situation, how his new maturity affects his 'take' on things. Please don't drop this one...
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