(#) monstrice901 2011-11-25I like DangerousAmber's idea. You should have an ultra-preachy one/drama filled one with the pastor, just to put a strain on the relationship. Obviously it's up to you what the effect would be, but, personally, I'd make the whole thing a bit sneakier. And then of course a shit bomb would explode when G's dad found out. Although, I wouldn't put that in for a while yet - let the relationship develop a bit first?
Also, you could have Frank accepting going back to school and living in with G and Mikey, like he was gonna be forced to at the beginning. Of course, now it has it's perks. ;) Anyway, have him go back to school and getting shit again, but Gerard helping him out? Could work.
That's all I really have at the moment, but the story is coming along great so far, so just continue and with any luck it'll stay up to standard. If I have anymore ideas I'll review again, and if you want anymore help, feel free to inbox me. This is a kick ass story, so it'd be a shame to see it end now. So, yeah, you want anymore ideas or anything, contact me. Or don't. I don't care AS LONG AS YOU CARRY ON THE STORY!!!
- I agree with monstrice901 and DangerousAmber, but I think you should have Frank apologize to his mom (not really). Frank could basically lie to his mom and say that he and Gerard thought about it and he was wrong, blah, blah, blah and then have him live with Gerard so he can be "closer to the church." That way he gets to live with Gerard (perks included) and then that'll give the relationship time to grow before the pastor finds out. If you want to add extra drama, you could always add something with Mikey...
I hope you find your inspiration for this awesome story. :)
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