by Kyia
1 Reviews
Category: Ouran High School Host Club -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: -
Warnings: [!] - Published: 2011/12/03 - Updated: 2011/12/04 - 11 words
Reviews
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(#) Apocalyto 2011-12-09 01:04:12 PM
Erm, so far you're story is good, but there are some problems. You don't have to make a new story every time to write a new chapter, you just have to click 'add chapter'. And no offense, but you're grammar is terrible. Maybe you could try using spell check or get a BETA? Other then that, your story is great.