"I'm really sorry Brenny, I don't want to. But you made me do it. Can you forgive me?"
Total mind fuck. Inception...
Wow yeah, this entire thing was fairly intense. I lost track of it unfortunately for awhile but I'm glad I stumbled across it again today. So absolutely wonderful.
This story was just mind-blowing.
Initiating slow-clap processer clap...clap...clap The perfect criminal... already dead. Such a interesting, well-written story with a great ending.
Woah, that ending was surreal, i loved it. Really quite sad though, looking back but still...wow. Total mind fuck.
Irrational things are needed sometimes. And I do indeed like it.
This was a good ending. Reminded me ever so slightly of Fight Club, but that is not a bad thing. Well done on another story finished.
Looking forward for your next update.
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