(#) Heymimusic 2011-12-07I laughed throughout the whole thing xD it was really hilarious and Gerard's questioning is priceless ! It sounds like something my own dad would do. If you say it's getting more exciting than it is now (which to me, it's already amazing) then I can't wait foe the next update :D
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-12-07The pace seems to of picked up now, and it's getting more exciting. Not that it wasn't already, it's just going to get better. I also thought this chapter was funny because Gerard's just so paranoid and protective:')
Still don't like Sean, though. Sleaze.
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