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by offical-killjoy 3 Reviews

What if Bellatrix had a daughter? who's the father and is she evil.....? choas shall unfold

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres: Crossover - Characters: Bellatrix,Draco,Lucius,Narcissa,Sirius,Voldemort - Published: 2011/12/22 - Updated: 2011/12/22 - 298 words


  • Malfoy

    (#) COLD1 2011-12-29 11:06:05 AM

    Ooooo...never seen anything like this before.

    Oh wait, I have about a million times so far. But the chapters were longer, the names less asinine, less cliche overall, and best of all.....dun dun dun no bloody Draco-love involved.

    Feel free to post more on this wonderful, intoxicating breath of stale air so that we may down-rate and abuse you some more.

    Author's response

    first off what makes you think there will be draco love their cousins! and secondly its short becouse its just an introduction so if you dont like it dont bloody read it and lastly you dont post stories so maybe you should try writing a story before you critisisemine
    thank you
  • Malfoy

    (#) devilgurlisaho 2012-01-02 01:29:09 AM get points for literacy...not. If reading your story is like reading your response, I'll go ahead and give an 'illiterate' rating right now.

    As for the Draco love comment, I think that had more to do with Draco being written OOC enough to be kind and caring...not the whiny little bitch he is. Just my opinion.

    As for writing my own fics, as you'll most likely pop out a second time with that particular comment, I don't because I don't have the gift, and I'm smart enough to not try to force my lack of writing skill onto a screen to torture others with. Maybe you should look into doing the same?

  • Malfoy

    (#) kaquao 2012-01-05 07:36:18 AM

    Agree with the 2 reviewers above. And like devilgurl, I like to listen to music, but I can't sing worth a damn. Same with writing, I like to read but my writing isn't worth a damn, either. So rather than expose my shortcomings to the world like you have, I leave my attempts on my hard-drive and usually try to forget they exist.

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