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Meet the Prince

When Akane gets the foolish idea that she could defend herself from future kidnappers, Ranma comes up with a cunning plan to show just how dangerous it could be to get abducted by an evil perverted...

Category: Ranma 1/2 - Rating: R - Genres: Humor, Romance - Characters: Akane, Ranma - Published: 2005/05/26 - Updated: 2005/05/26 - 1535 words

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• Prisoner of the Iron Mask

  (#) Deadpan 2005-05-26 04:41:17 PM

  I liked this story as a thread over on the Addventure, and I am pleased to see it getting a rewrite and consolodation here.
  
  One item in chapter 3. It seems odd that Akane would not be able to see that the castle is inside a building once they reach the open courtyart.

  Author's response

  Thanks.
  
  I fixed this a bit by making it clearer that the castlewalls block her view of the building walls and glare of the sun keeps her from looking up at the glass ceiling.
  
  The office-building is supposed to look like a giant glasshouse from the inside. I will try to insert a bit more about the buildings's appearance in future chapters.

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