A shopping trip for Voldemort. Peter gets a prize. Hagrid domesticates an animal.
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-06-21 04:24:11 PMOuch. Brutal chapter, but well done. I don't think I really care who Harry chooses, it's really just a lose-lose situation. I just hope Lucius Malfoy suffers. Didn't Voldemort say no one was to touch her? I think it'd be smashing if he read the git's mind and Crucio'd him for a while... Well, enough fake British accents for one day, I'll look forward to your next update. Good luck with Real Life.
Author's responseReal life (studying) is going well. Its war out there, so this won't be the last chapter with a sizeable body count. Lucius set himself up with a nice alibi, so don't expect to see him get his anytime soon. Jim
- Good chapter. I have never seen an active Peter in any story, and I like it. I also think that your right about the twins opening a shop at the Alley is ill-advised. Anyway best of luck with the test, and always update ASAP.
Author's responseThank you. I take a good deal of pride in my version of Peter. I am glad you like him. Jim
- You know, I've never actually thought of it that way before. It was always "one of those things that just happens and no one questions it" kind of thing. The opening of the joke shop thing that is.
Oh man. My heart goes out for Luna. I wish you would have picked someone else though. I really like Luna's character and yea... Her getting that kind of "treatment" doesn't sit well with me.
Other than that, great chapter. Even if the Heroes are getting their collective asses kicked this round.
Author's responseThe joke shop always seemed like a really bad idea to me. This was a necessary, but brutal chapter in the story. I try to make it up to Luna by featuring her heavily in Bungle in the Jungle, but what happened in this story was a key event that will trigger several of the main plot points. As for the heros getting their asses kicked, one thing that seems to be lost on the reviewers here and at FF(dot)net is that the dark side lost the leader of the largest werewolf pack in Britain and several of his lieutenants killed offscreen. So its not as bad as you might think. There are some major battles and much more character death coming soon. War is hell after all. Jim
(#) BlueBlanket 2006-07-19 05:47:33 PMAgain a very good chapter. Once more you have left us with more questions and a desire to keep reading. I sincerely hope you finish this story as I cant wait for each chapter.
Author's responseWell I am back and here is the latest chapter. Hope you enjoy! Jim