"Gerard Arthur Way, three counts of first degree murder," cried the bailiff. Underneath his unruly hair, Gerard wore the dead-eyed grin of a corpse.
Exciting start! Good job on creating atmosphere. To be honest, this isn't a story I've seen before, so I'm definitely interested. Keep it up!
This is really interesting and unique; I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
This is diffrent (good way), and interesting. please keep it up
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