Sequel to Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way. Over a year has passed, and Gerard is reunited with his daughter Gia. She has a lot to hide, and Gerard finds that she has grown up and changed.
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-01-06 09:27:17 AMReally good chapter. Really tense. I feel so bad for Gia and I can really understand all their emotions. Also, I'm really intrigued as to where Gia is going. She doesn't have anywhere to go, nor anything with her. Unless she means something like suicide, which would probably make this story have a huge tense chapter where someone finds her trying to jump or something.
Anyway, really great job. Oh and if you don't feel like writing, don't push yourself. Update when you can and want to! :)
- To be honest, I was slightly disappointed by this chapter. The wwriting was great as usual and it was creative and everything but if she's running away it won't be anything new. She's already run away in the last chapter and it would be slightly repetitive. Then again, she might not and you have another plan. Either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And take your time to update and don't push too hard.