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Lovesick Melodies

by GAClive 1 Reviews

Rhymed verse based off of the feelings I had at the time. First romantic poem I've written.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2012/01/06 - Updated: 2012/01/06 - 124 words - Complete

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  • Lovesick Melodies

    (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-20 04:16:33 AM

    Poetry is obviously still one of 'your things' because this was quite amazing.

    The last line left a lasting impression.

    "To wait for dreams I wish I could keep."

    I can't even explain to you how that line made me feel but it did evoke emotion as I read it.

    Author's response

    Thank you so, so much. I feel like poetry is the only way I can actually convey emotions in my writing, I just seem to struggle with that in fiction but with poetry I feel like I can be honest. Thank you, again, for this lovely review.

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