The drummer and the bassist; the heartbeat and the pulse. Short BIKEY one-shot. Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
- So cute! I've never read a bikey before
Author's responseI really like Bikey stories (third favourite behind Frikey and Pikey) but you just don't see all that many so I thought it might be fun to try to write my own. I'm really glad that you thought it was cute! :)
(#) tortillachip 2012-01-07 11:14:29 AMThis is great! I've only ever read one Bikey before, and I actually just stumbled upon that one, but I figured I'd read this because you're such a great author. Anyway, I really liked how this started. It was really original and it was a very interesting way to introduce what Mikey felt about himself and Bob. Of course it doesn't give too much information, but it gave just the right amount. I also really liked that it was because of a storm. I'm always a huge fan of people being scared of storms. I don't know what it is about being scared of storms, but it just really works well with Mikey. I liked that it wasn't that Mikey was scared and Bob heard him whimpering or something and he comes to comfort him. Not that I'd know, but Bob seems like the one that is always so fearful and strong and all that other stuff, so I thought it was really interesting that he was afraid of storms as well. I've read oter fanfiction stories with Bob, never Bikey though, and he was never afraid or embarrassed in them, but in this he was afraid of storms and he blushed and I really liked this because it just seems more...real. He has to get embarrassed sometimes. Anyway, I also liked the ending and how the title tied into it. It was really clever and it just was beautiful. Well, I really liked this. It was extremely well written, original, and it was just really terrific. I really liked this. Great job!!
Author's responseThank you so very much; I'm really, really pleased that you thought this went alright!
I really love Bikey stories, I think that it's a seriously underused and underrated pairing, so I thought that it'd be fun to try and write my own little one-shot.
It's really touching to know that the fact that I wrote this made you want to read it; that is quite possibly the most uplifting thing I've heard in a very long time. It honestly does mean so much to me to know what people think about my writing so to hear something like that really is amazing. So, for lack of a better word, thanks!
I'm relieved that you liked the start, that's the part that I was nervous about the most because it is kind of different to how I normally start my writing.
I love sorm-based stories too! I don't really know why, but I think that it has something to do with Tails (fox-kid from Sonic the Hedgehog) having some really cute comic book storylines revolving around his fear of them. If that makes any sort of irrelevant sense.
I was kinda worried that I wrote Bob really badly (I've never written a story with him in before in which he's had more than a background role) so I'm really glad that you thought it seemed real.
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH for taking the time to leave such a lovely and detailed review; I really can't describe how much it means to me! :)
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Anyway, this is so cute, and fluffy, yet amazing, and exactly what I need right now, so thanks so much :)
I love Bikeys just as much as the next person, and there aren't that many out there, so thank you for that :)
As usual, it was so amazing :) Love your writing :)
Author's responseAw, wow, thank you very much! I'm really glad/pleased/exalted that you liked this, it really does mean a lot!
I love Bikeys too, I think it's a seriously underrated pairing and so I thought it'd be kinda fun to do my own.
Thank you so very, VERY, VERY much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)
(#) Love_it_or_leave_it 2012-01-08 04:58:41 PMThat was amazing!! So beautifully written! Well done! If I could give out prizes for writing, you would most definitely get one!! Here's the closest I can get: hands over millions if skittles, pancakes, cupcakes and cookies hopefully that will fill the gap of the non-existent award...
Author's responseAw, thank you very much for leaving such a lovely review! :D
(#) Dmitri-Way 2012-01-09 11:53:09 PMOh my god I love bikey cant tell if its my second otp or if frob is...
I love this is excellent thank you for contributing it to this bikeyless world
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm really, really pleased that you liked this!
There definitely needs to be more Bikey in this world. :D