15- I Started Something I Couldn't Finish
I could only watch as they took his body from me, their words making no sense to my suddenly deaf ears.
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-01-17You updated! And what an update it was! A tale of romance, obsession, tragedy and angst. And when Alex stabbed Frank just there? WOW.
I love this story. It's like being wrapped up in a really exciting soap opera.
Author's responseWell, thank you very much.
Haha, you make it sound so surprising that I updated. I didn't think I was that behind. X.x
Kidding but again, thank you for the huge compliment.
I'm glad you're so wrapped up in it lol. Soap Operas can get pretty intense. Fanfic soap operas... Just you wait. ;)
I love how you wrapped it up btw. Romance, obsession, tragedy, and angst. Check, Check, Check, and check. All present.
(#) McrmyBVBparawhore 2012-01-17Wow . . . so a lot was going on in that chapter! Like Bad_Romance said, I really hope that Frank's okay!!
Beautiflly written and I hope you update as soon as you can!
Author's response:) Thank you for the kind review!
I hope you enjoy where the story goes.
(#) xojeaniebeanxo 2012-01-17I reeeeaaaalllllyyyy hope Frank is alright!!! You seriously should update this one soon (please), considering the cliffhanger that you left us with :)
Author's responseHaha, thank you for the review. I really hope you enjoyed the follow up chapter and I'll try updating again soon!
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-02-08I am slightly worried about what happens next, but only because of that ending (obviously). Godddddd I HATE Alex! Besides the fact he's got the same name as my ex's new bitchface, I can't stand his character. There is a very simple solution to his issue: Accept that the best friend doesn't want you, quit talking to her, and move on (out of state, out of mind). Believe me, it'll work after a while.
Author's responseHaha so strange how many people hate him! I wrote him to be the 'knight in shining armor' type only without the love mirrored back on Hayley's side.
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