(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2012-01-21Damn poor Brendon. This is maybe worse than Alex dying. But i love the conversation between Ryan and Brendon at the end. Ryan's really deep and philosophical, and its cool to have a character like that. I get all tingly when you update :) definitely my favorite story.
(#) TheAnonymous 2012-01-21Less Than Three
I loved Ryan's little speech thing, because, well it's true. You're born, you die. The end. What happens inbetween won't change that, so getting caught up in it is just wasting time.
Anyway, great chapter and story, can't wait to read more!
(#) PartyPoison 2012-01-28You would be surprised by the amount of authors that contradict themselves within their writing. But it gladdens me that you don’t forget (Just like an elephant.) Unfortunately I am not so lucky. Seems I am always forgetting something at one point or another.
It was, although predicted, still sad to see Brendon’s heartbreak. The emotion you put into it was very real, along with description. You executed it perfectly.
I enjoyed Ryan’s words. It seems you always have these things in some of your stories that are so insightful in the worst way. I sometimes wonder if it’s a good thing or not that I agree with them.
This story is fantastic, but so are all of your other ones. It would be nice if, although you focus on this one you also updated some of your others as well. That might just be me being greedy though and wanting all of your words for my eyes to devour so you just do what you want. Write whatever comes to you.
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2012-04-05Okay, s I have just read the whole story. Okay, it took me a long time because I went into 'slow-reading-mode' which I only use for amazing stories. The whole plot folded out as a really emotional and real story and asldkjfasldkfjh I can't even describe it's absolute perfection. You are an amazing author and I can't wait for another update!!!!
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