While skipping class, Archie decides to learn some things which were probably best left unknown. But nothing could have prepared him for the schocking secret he's about to learn...
- Ahem. Six million? Australia alone has 21 million. You must mean six BILLION. Six BILLION would be much more like it. And what the world happened to his torn-up arm and dislocated shoulder? Not to mention the fact his spine might have taken some damage as well.
I really like how Tulias is shaping up the story. Could have something to do with me liking wolves. And that note about cowlick horns was great. And I myself think Archie's life will take an unexpected turn and go for the better or worse tonight. (Meh.) Also, I've noticed you've given up answering your reviews? What's the matter, then? Are you getting too many? Anyways, I love your story and if you don;'t update soon I will leave the site...big dramtic voice FOOORRRREEEVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRR!!!!!
Not like that has anythign to do with you. The point is, update. Soon. Within the week if possible.
Author's responseCrud... yeah, that's probably what I emant. Let me advise you on something- NEVER try to write a serious story such as DWM at one int eh morning XDD you get far too scatterbrained. And crud.. his shoulder... I kinda answered that question in your other review, but yes, I admit it, I forgot about those injuries. I'll get back to them in the next chapter. That's good to know that Tulais isn't hated (to a point) I like wolves too 8D Well, as for Archie's life, you'll have to read to find out... I'll ahve to type so that you can read thoguh... And yeah, thanks for bothering me about answering reviews. I've been lazy, sorry, but I'm answering them again.
- I love how you managed to put in your character with actual myths. Loved this chapter, as usual. Just one question, how many chapters do you plan on making this story?
Author's responseThanks for the response! ANd the compliment is flattered As for how many chapters, I have to make sure to get quite a few things/information/problems into this story, so we could be looking at possibly 20 chapters, I'd wager. I'm trying to keep it short, but knwoing me... it probably won't. I know where it's going to end... it's just a matter of getting there, and then the sequel I must write as well... I hope it isn't starting to bore you! horrified