More drama and Frank faces up to some of his demons.
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-01-24 02:08:18 PMMONTY PITHON OWNS THE FUCKING WORLD!!! (coughs) I really liked the chapter, beautifully written and I just happened to pick the perfect soundtrack while reading XD
Author's responseMONTY PYTHON is EPIC!!! My favourite has got to be 'And Now For Something Completely Different'! It's just so weird.
Glad you liked the chapter, and the way it was written, and what were you listening to??
(#) MCRmy_Chick 2012-01-24 02:16:18 PMMy Lord, that was brutal. O.O This was a great chapter, though, just the perfect amount of violence and emotion. I particularly enjoyed the scene where they find Gerard. It ALMOST makes me feel bad for what I'm about to do to him and poor Frankie in DM. >:D
Cough Anyway, I loved it.
Author's responseYeah - I love punch ups! I'm glad you think I got the violence/emotion right, and the finding Gerard bit was actually really difficult to write.
Ohhhhhh - and what are you gonna do to them, I may have to check this story out!
- Monty Python is awesome 'It's just a flesh wound' ahaha. I have a friend and he's like obsessed with Monty Python, he's always quoting stuff from it lol
Glad to see Frank beat the shit out of those assholes xD
Author's responseYeah - I'm like that, and all of my mates are obsessed with it too, so we're a bunch of freaks. The other day, I just turn round and say 'Ni' to one of my friends. To which his reply was 'nooooo - not the knights of Ni!'. Everyone looked at us like we're strange - why on earth would they think that?
And yep - Frank's badass! Now, atleast!
(#) rowangiggles 2012-01-25 11:11:36 AMgreat chapter! and i totally agree with you on the inbetweeners thing a Monty Python is epic! and ive added you on FB im Rowan Pritchard :)
i love this story its brill- cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's responseMonty Python is bloody amazing! Thanks for adding me and expressing your love for this story!
(#) aweirdtree 2012-01-26 11:21:49 AMwooooow - that was great. thank you! it sounds weird that i find this chapter great as it's mostly about fighting but who the fuck cares. i liked it anyhow.
and it wasn't really cliche... well, maybe a bit, but you know what? it was a bit cliche but in good way, it still sounded amazing. that's really a talent, you know, to write about things like that and still make it beliavable.
...and i love The Simpsons... and don't really like Monty Python :D hahaha, guess he's okay... we were just once forced to watch Monty Python's Meaning of Life (or whatever it is) in the ninth grade and i got traumatized as the day sucked anyway. lol, whatever - thanks for this chapter and am waiting for more.
Author's responseI love punch ups, so I know where you are coming from? And yeah, it was cliche, as much as I try to avoid that. But I'm glad you thought that I pulled it off! I actually love your reviews! Sorry - they're just great!
But you got traumatised by Monty Python? How?! XD, nah, fair enough if you don't like 'em - each to their own!
And I'll be writing more momentarily!
(#) TakeMyLife 2012-01-28 07:44:23 AMI Love this story so much! it's a shame that gerard got beaten but it's so cute how frank loves him so much that he wouldn't stop until he got his revenge.
Yet again this is an amazing story and brilliantly witten. well done!
can't wait for the next update!
Author's responseYeah - Frank's a sweetie really! (Grrrrr) Glad you like the story and my writing and all!
(#) Merci-PourLeVenin 2012-01-29 12:22:45 AMNew reader, holla.
But no really.
I found this story, like at 11 this morning.
And then somehow now I've gotten to this chapter an I fucking loved this.
I came close to reviewing other chapters but then o considered how stupid that would be.
At first I really wanted to virtually slap Frankie in the face. He reminds me too much of myself.
But I absolutely adore him at this point.
I simply love all the characters, well minus Phin. She's alright.
But that's not the point.
This has been one damn good fic you're writing, seeing as I've spent over 13 hours reading it throughout the day.
So when I saw that I'd gotten to the last chapter I was literally like "FUCK."
Yes this is probably going in my top favourites.
Bitch, update soon
And I mean bitch in a loving way, really.
Damn I know how to ramble on don't I?
But yeah fuck you I'm in love with this fic.
Author's responseWow - you read this in a day? Clearly it's not long enough! And don't worry 'bout reviewing others chapters - any feedback is welcomed and loved. Well apart from when people say it's shit!
Yeah, Frank was annoying at first, but I actually preferred him that way to how he is now! Meh. Glad you like the characters, bar Phin. I try and put something in about the OCs so it wasn't FrankGerardFrankGerardFrankGerard. That bugs me in other stories, so I wasn't gonna put it in mine! I can understand not liking Phin - a few people have said that, so I tried to minimise how involved she was, but then, loads of people said that they really liked her - so now I don't know what to do!!
I'm glad you like the story so much! And I'll update ASAP. In the mean time, there's a prequel to this; Before Back In The Day! You might wanna check that out ;) (just shamelessly promoting myself)