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I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)

One-shot in Second P.O.V.: Your father is a drunk and beats you. When you finally get the will to escape, can you get some help when all hope seems to abandon you? And will that hope come in the f...

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama, Parody, Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2006/06/24 - Updated: 2006/06/25 - 4861 words - Complete

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• I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)

  (#) punkprincess GC 2006-07-02 10:42:41 AM

  Wow that was amazing I love your choice of words. It was easy to follow great job

  Author's response

  Thanks! I try on these things, ya know? Hah.

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  (#) lovecantsaveyou 2006-07-06 11:29:50 AM

  One of the best fan-fiction stories I have ever read.Great use of synonyms and good sentence structure.I loved it.

  Author's response

  Thanks! I really love reviews like this! Not that they all wern't great.

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  (#) ScarsNStories 2006-07-09 11:40:49 AM

  Wow. Great job, really. I've never read a story from second person POV, and this was a good first one. Amazingly worded, hilarious, and perfect in every way.
  
  Poor Pete's socks though. I liked those, too bad I ruined them.... -sigh-

  Author's response

  Yeah, it's fun to write in second point of view sometimes. Try something different, you know? I looove those socks too. Don't worry, I'm sure Pete has like a bajillion of them. :)

• I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)

  (#) sing4me09 2006-08-26 11:29:29 AM

  too cute!

  Author's response

  haha, just like you!

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  (#) ForNeverYours 2006-09-10 05:08:35 AM

  I love it! I wish I could write good one-shots, but I suck. Keep up the good work!

  Author's response

  i wish i could write good long stories, but i suck, haha. and i shall keep up the work that is good! erm, wow, i'm starting to talk like yoda, hehe.

• I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)

  (#) x-xJafax-x 2006-11-07 10:57:41 AM

  that was so adorkably cute i love it ^^

  Author's response

  good to know i can write "cute" and demented. what a range, eh?

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  (#) Carey 2007-04-11 02:55:19 PM

  Thats pretty....CREEPY!

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  (#) Carey [again} 2007-04-11 02:57:37 PM

  I was just kidding. You had a well structured plot with good follow through, and it was funny.
  
  Ha ha u love Patrick! jk

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  (#) haley 2007-07-19 09:40:14 AM

  WHOA. this story is absolutely amazing. i LOVE it.

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  (#) Lauri 2007-07-19 09:47:21 AM

  okay, this is haley's friend and i read this last night, this story was truly amazingggg. like, the way one event leads to another. wow, that's all i can say. i'm reading this again :] .

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