- I enjoy the idea of Beatrix and Lani training together and giving each other little compliments and blown kisses. But are they doing it to deliberately provoke their audience into lust, or are they not? It seems that Beatrix isn't, well why does she agree to fight before an audience then?
I love the way that Lani won't admit out loud how good Beatrix is.
I don't really understand what the "one, two, three" part is actually supposed to mean.
I like the idea that Lani lets her weapon dictate her moves.
I like the dialogue. It's pretty snappy.
The ending is a bit abrupt.
I really enjoyed this though. I like it when the characters assert their martila nature and have a nice fight. :)
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