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spending the summer with MCR!

by lalalalaMCRlalalala 1 Reviews

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2012/02/09 - Updated: 2012/02/09 - 209 words

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  • spending the summer with MCR!

    (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-02-09 08:34:04 AM

    If you continue with this, I have a few tips for you:

    1) Capital Letters
    2) Actual Paragraphs
    3) Correct Grammar
    4) Punctuation
    5) Spaces After the Periods
    6) No elipses unless you're being suspenseful or leading up to something and
    7) DETAIL

    Hope that helps.

    Author's response

    thank you thank you! this does help! :) its just i was typing really quick and i was runnig out of ideas :( sorry

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