(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-02-09If you continue with this, I have a few tips for you:
1) Capital Letters
2) Actual Paragraphs
3) Correct Grammar
5) Spaces After the Periods
6) No elipses unless you're being suspenseful or leading up to something and
Hope that helps.
Author's responsethank you thank you! this does help! :) its just i was typing really quick and i was runnig out of ideas :( sorry
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