(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-02-11 04:03:32 PMThis is absolutely awesome! Words cannot describe the pure original awesomeness of this story so far. I eagerly await more of this awesomeness! :)
Author's responseWow, that's a lot of awesome! Thank you very much for taking the time to review!
(#) XCherrikidXD 2012-02-12 04:37:52 AMWow i love this its different than anyother story i have read before i love it more soon, keep writing :)
Author's responseYeah, you haven't seen anything like it cos it's come from my freaky mind;) thank you, I'm glad you like it:)
(#) PartyPoison 2012-02-13 08:31:18 PMI really enjoy this story so far. It's very interesting. Never have I seen an idea similar to this, it's truly brilliant. The fact that it is written well doesn't hurt either.
I hope to see more soon!
Author's responseOH wow, you read my fic. This is like, awesome, because I love your shit so much. I have Send Me Away tabbed on my laptop in the hope that you might update? Anyway, thank you very much, I'm glad you think it is well written:3 You will! (hopefully)
(#) FrankieXIero 2012-02-13 08:43:00 PMThis isn't bad at all! I love it! Seriously can't wait for more!
Just an idea as to where this story could go (since you've been asking) I was thinking you could have Spencer and Ryan talking about how 'Holy shit, we're both real!' You know?
Then later Jon shows up and it's like BAM! He's real too!
Then after all three are caught up and discovered that yes, they all do really exist; Ryan meets Brendon before Spencer and Jon. Ryan tries to convince Brendon that Jon and Spencer and himself are real but Brendon doesn't believe him so Ryan makes a big social scene to prove that he is real and other people can actually see him too.
I don't know, kinda just spewed there and you could go in a totally different direction for this story if you wanted because, hey it's YOUR story and you can do wahtever the hell you want with it and I will still read it so cheers and good luck with writing! :)
Author's responseThank you! I've been thinking about the plot-line you just gave me, and as lovely as it is that you actually thought about this I don't think I'll use it. In this fic, Ryan's character is really introverted, so I don't think he would do that, if you get what I mean? But thank you so much for your ideas, its so kind.
Thank you for carrying on reading it!