(#) aweirdtree 2012-03-03thanks for this chapter! it was amazing, as always (: thank you, really.
and i love Mikey... his character's just so wonderful. and this story, the atmosphere is just so fucking real... dammit, girl, you should write a book or something.
plus, it doesn't matter if this story's going on a bit slowly; in fact, i didn't even realize it. it fits so well in this one, it would definitely ruin the plot if the things would go on too quickly.
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2012-03-04D: so awesome and moving. the words kind of knit themselves together and trap you in the emotions of the characters and the events of the story - it is a really amazing effect.
my favourite line was probably "I play for my life, because music is my life" mainly because that i can relate to it so much. basically because thats pretty much true about me (:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! IT IS TRULY AWESOME!!
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-03-04Alright. I've been waiting to review your story cause I wanted to finish readin it first. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! I think we've established this. Just how your words flow. I hope you don't mind, but I did use a tiny bit of your story for some lyrics. It's the part how chapter 10 is. If you mind tell me so i can change it. Thank's for writing this and please update soon!
(#) benzedrine_barbie 2012-03-05Ahh this is still so good and suspenseful! I can't wait for what comes next ;) um...I really liked the way you described betrayal, that really resonated with me. And Mikey's so cute :D Email me back soon, I miss you and hope everything's going okay. Great chapter! xo
(#) JessicaAlexandra 2012-03-05I literally squealed when I saw that you updated. What a nice surprise for a lonely monday night. xD I hope you're feeling better than you were I know I was worried about you for a bit. Definitely glad to have you back to writing. Anyway I want to hurt Ocean, I felt so sad to see Frank lose the only person he considers his best friend. Also I love Mikey in this chapter. He's so awkwardly adorable I almost have cavities. Y'know I kinda want Frank to end up with him in the end. But yeah update soon and continue getting better.
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