"...and empty of his liquids, he found himself surprised that he still had as many tears to shed as he did that day."
(#) FlyingSmoke 2012-03-06 03:04:34 PMThat is such a weird lyric you have there about chopsticks...
Soo... Binding to a corpse. That's new. I don't think that's something widely done. Certainly stomach-wretching enough for the audience, let alone Gerard... Poor Gerard. That's... that was sick. Very sick. I'm surprised they didn't tie them closer together. They could have. I guess it was so he could puke, and couldn't kill himself by choking on that puke. Puke. Bleh.
Congrats. I think this is one of the worse chapters yet.
Update soon! And congrats on the nomination for the Ficwad Awards!
(#) ficlet_fairies 2012-03-06 03:43:02 PMYeah, congrat with the Fuckwad awards! You deserve that, this story makes my skin crawl in the best way possible! I can't wait for a new chapter of momento mori!... (I don't think I spelled that right...)
Meh. Wonderfully torturous chapter! Chopsticks... Hm.
(#) BoomBoomJude 2012-03-07 01:18:45 PMLets just say that was gross.
I kept imagining a huge, dead Gremlin, and I'm not sure why.
I have an idea, by the way :D
First, ya gotta shave his hair off. Make the man bald.
Then you pour hot tar/pitch in a cone his head. Or use a cloth to smear it around his face, whatever works.
You let it dry, and then rip it off. It takes out hair and lumps of skin.
You could set the pitch on fire before ripping it off, so he would endure the fires heat first.
AND, victims usually ran around bashing their heads/faces into things to try and end the pain, much to the torturers amusement.