Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Put an X on the Floor
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6 ReviewsI know you hate me but I want your opinion on my idea for this next chapter.
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Put an X on the Floor
(#) Dollydaydream31 2012-03-09 03:20:33 PM
It's going great so far! I'd like to see the story vary from bot Frank and Gerard's POV's. It just makes it more interesting :P -
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(#) destinationdestroya 2012-03-09 03:28:21 PM
1. I love your story I think it's great. 2. You're a great writer
3. I know this isn't helpful, but whichever you want, all of them look interesting.
4. You'd better update soon or I will cry, I love this story so far!Author's response
Woah that you think I'm a great writer really means alot to me, thank you so much -
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(#) Shiwoggi 2012-03-09 03:50:03 PM
Keep it in Gerard's POV :3
Otherwise, it gets really cliche.
But I do love this story - it makes me laugh so hard :') -
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(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-03-09 04:50:10 PM
I like Gerard's POV, but having Frank's could be insightful.
-Just started reading-
Mwa ha ha, I saw this in the ...thingy? And was thinking "Hm... This looks like it has decent grammar." and I decided to read it. And shit. It's fucking amazing. There are some spelling mistakes (isn't there always?) but I really like it, it's most certainly very funny and just plain entertaining. I think... That if Gerard and Frank weren't best friends perhaps it would be rushing, but because they've flirted so much and known each other for so long it works.
~uninsightful review over~Author's response
Whoa thts an amazing review thank you so much that made me feel really good XD -
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(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-03-09 08:20:53 PM
There should be a Frank's view. Like it full of Frerard none stop, cause that seems to be what he's thinking all the time XD. It would be really funny. By the way, I LOVE THIS STORY! -
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(#) KelseyChem 2012-03-09 09:59:14 PM
It's so fucking great, ohmygee X3 AND YES DO A FRANKIE POV !