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Chapter 4

by KobraBlaze 4 Reviews

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/03/20 - Updated: 2012/03/21 - 898 words - Complete

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  • Stay Together

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-20 07:32:48 PM

    Oh! Cliffhanger!
    I really like this story! It's super original and you're a great writer. I love that its got a brotherly Gerard and Mikey element to it and Frikey at the same time. Hope you update soon!
    OXO

    Author's response

    Thank you so much. Im delighted that you like this chapter. I really do want the brotherly love to come across in the story which I'm finding kinda hard so I'm glad you see it. I shall update in a small while now so be ready! Thank you so much for reviewing!
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    (#) MyChemicalRomance10 2012-03-20 09:56:45 PM

    man this is a really good story! I cant wait for an update! You are an amazing writer and should keep writing more stories :)

    Author's response

    Thank you so much. You are so nice!!! I'm really glad you like this story. Thanks for reviewing!
  • Stay Together

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-20 11:18:47 PM

    Absolutely nothing about this chapter was dull! It had me hooked all of the way through and has left me eagerly wondering what will happen next. I loved how Gerard was wary of Frank at first, it just seems to be how the protective side of Gerard would react in this story and it works perfectly. I actually let out a gasp when Mikey told Gerard about their father and I'm really excited to know what he's gonna say next.,

    Great job on a really gripping chapter and I can't wait for more! :)

    Author's response

    Wow. Thank you so so so much! I was trying to keep it as gripping as you said but I didn't think I did so well so I'm so happy you thought it was good! I was deciding on whether or not to make Gerard over protective and dislike Frank straight away. But I wasn't sure where to go after that. I will have a new chapter up soon hopefully. Thanks a million for reviewing. It helps a tonne!!!
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    (#) Frankies_Hands 2012-03-21 07:32:43 AM

    I cannot wait for another chapter. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I was shocked that Gerard would blame himself! This shows the protective side of Gerard and I am in love with this story now. It is full of surprises! Please update soon!
    -xoxoL

    Author's response

    Thank you! I'm delighted that you like it. I try to keep it as interesting as I can but I thought this was lacking it at the start so I'm really happy you think it's alright! I should have another chapter up real soon! Thanks for reviewing!

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