(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-20 07:32:48 PMOh! Cliffhanger!
I really like this story! It's super original and you're a great writer. I love that its got a brotherly Gerard and Mikey element to it and Frikey at the same time. Hope you update soon!
Author's responseThank you so much. Im delighted that you like this chapter. I really do want the brotherly love to come across in the story which I'm finding kinda hard so I'm glad you see it. I shall update in a small while now so be ready! Thank you so much for reviewing!
(#) MyChemicalRomance10 2012-03-20 09:56:45 PMman this is a really good story! I cant wait for an update! You are an amazing writer and should keep writing more stories :)
Author's responseThank you so much. You are so nice!!! I'm really glad you like this story. Thanks for reviewing!
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-20 11:18:47 PMAbsolutely nothing about this chapter was dull! It had me hooked all of the way through and has left me eagerly wondering what will happen next. I loved how Gerard was wary of Frank at first, it just seems to be how the protective side of Gerard would react in this story and it works perfectly. I actually let out a gasp when Mikey told Gerard about their father and I'm really excited to know what he's gonna say next.,
Great job on a really gripping chapter and I can't wait for more! :)
Author's responseWow. Thank you so so so much! I was trying to keep it as gripping as you said but I didn't think I did so well so I'm so happy you thought it was good! I was deciding on whether or not to make Gerard over protective and dislike Frank straight away. But I wasn't sure where to go after that. I will have a new chapter up soon hopefully. Thanks a million for reviewing. It helps a tonne!!!
(#) Frankies_Hands 2012-03-21 07:32:43 AMI cannot wait for another chapter. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I was shocked that Gerard would blame himself! This shows the protective side of Gerard and I am in love with this story now. It is full of surprises! Please update soon!
Author's responseThank you! I'm delighted that you like it. I try to keep it as interesting as I can but I thought this was lacking it at the start so I'm really happy you think it's alright! I should have another chapter up real soon! Thanks for reviewing!