(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-26Yet again, you've left me stunned and desperate for more of this fantastic story!
I thought that it was really sweet that the first thing Gerard thought of when he woke up was if Mikey was okay or not, which reinforced the idea of his character being extremely overprotective of Mikey. I really liked how Gerard interrogated Frank, I could just picture it happening and it added a lot to the story by the way of throwing in a bit of conflict, but the kind of conflict that has a deeper meaning to it (both Frank's and Gerard's longing to help Mikey). You seem to be the master of cliffhangers and this chapter was absolutely no exception; I'm dying to see what happens next and how Gerard will react to hearing about poor old Mikey's mental/dietary state. I can kinda foresee Gerard sort of exploding.
Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's responseThank you so much. I'm really happy you like it. You have definitley picked the story up perfectly. The thing about the conflict is spot on and I'm glad it came through! I do try to leave the chapters off with suspense as much as possible but I hope it's not annoying. Gerard is certainly exploding at this point. Frank did not realise Gerard didn't know so the tension between the characters is tough on them. I am over the moon that you enjoyed the chapter and I shall try to update tonight.
Thank you for reviewing. It's really uplifting to hear you like it! :)
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