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Chapter 12

by KobraBlaze 4 Reviews

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/03/28 - Updated: 2012/03/28 - 910 words - Complete

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  • Stay Together

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-28 03:44:11 PM

    Lovely chapter. Frank is so adorably protective of Mikey, and so is Gerard. I love it! Hope you update soon!
    OXO

    Author's response

    Thank you very much! Yes, both Gerard and Frank are very protective on Mikey. I'm glad you liked it. I hope to have another update tonight!
  • Stay Together

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-28 04:22:35 PM

    This deffinitely NOT a boring chapter; it held my attention all the way through, which is something of an acheivement. I think that it really makes sense for Mikey to not think that he matters or that anyone should care, I mean, two people out of a world of people care and that world includes his parents who are suppose to care about him so why should Mikey believe Frank and Gerar when the world is telling him different? I liked how close Mikey came to confiding in Frank, to the point of admitting finally that he's not okay, but how he shyed away from it in the end; this staye true to character and added a lot is suspense to the chapter.
    I eagerly await more! :)

    Author's response

    This is such a nice review. Thank you! I'm glad it kept your attention because I was thinking was it was getting boring! So it's great to hear its not. I'm very relieved this story makes sense and stays true to the characters. I was feeling that they would seem out of place and didnt ring through to their personality. Mikey has finally admitted it which was quite a dramatic step but hasn't got full trust in him. Or anyone really! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm sorry for saying at some stage that I would maybe update twice last night or in the morning but I didn't get around to doing it! Sorry :(
    Thank you very much for the kind review! :)
  • Stay Together

    (#) Neblina 2012-03-28 07:30:29 PM

    this was a sweet chapter and not boring at all =) keep up the good work

    Author's response

    Thank you!I'm happy that you thought it was sweet and not boring. Thanks for the lovely review
  • Stay Together

    (#) RockMusic 2012-03-28 07:57:04 PM

    It wasn't boring it was sweet. It's the most adorable thing how much Frank cares for Mikey

    Author's response

    Thank you! Frank really does care which I think is mostly shown in this chapter. Thank you for the nice review!

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