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Chapter 18- The End

by KobraBlaze 3 Reviews

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/05 - Updated: 2012/04/06 - 1025 words - Complete

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  • Stay Together

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-05 07:22:01 PM

    This was a really good first chaptered story! Even though 'chaptered' isn't a word...anyway! It was lovely; there was romance, there was brotherly protectiveness, there was a giant mistake that was corrected. I hope you write more soon!
    OXO

    Author's response

    Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed the whole story. I was unsure when I read over it again but I'm happy you like it. I shall try to have that new story/one shot up soon. Thank you for reviewing the whole way through this story. It was very helpful!
  • Stay Together

    (#) Frankies_Hands 2012-04-06 06:48:16 AM

    This story had me the whole way through. I'm sad it's over but it was amazing while it lasted. This story had that little touch to it that made you want to keep going. Like an addiction. I cannot wait to read some of your other work.
    -xoxoL

    Author's response

    Thank you!! I'm really glad that you have enjoyed the story. I tried to keep it as interesting as possible. It was so nice to hear that you want to read more of my work. That really helps! :). I hope to have that new one-shot/story up tonight or tomorrow perhaps. Thank you for the lovely review!!!
  • Stay Together

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-06 04:54:41 PM

    That was an absolutely perfect ending! I loved how Gerard felt guilty about what he did, but managed to make up with the other two in the end. I thought it was great how Frank was really wary of him at first, perhaps more than a little bit angry, because I thought that really showed how much he cares for Mikey. The ending itself was fantastic; bittersweet, but with a nice warm fuzzy feeling that makes the reader feel that everything will be okay for the characters.

    Great job on a fantastic first chapter-story! Well done. :D

    Author's response

    Thank you!!! I'm really happy to see that you enjoyed it. I'm glad Franks protectiveness of Mikey came through in this chapter. I felt that it was an important key in the last couple of chapters. I am also really happy to hear that you got a sense of everything being okay for the characters as cliche as it is but I was finding it quite hard to end and I wanted the feeling of achievement in each of the characters minds. I have really enjoyed reading all your reviews and I am so happy you stuck the whole way through. It was very helpful! :)

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