“Punk,” Frank repeated, trying the syllable out in his mouth. It felt new and slightly scary, but it sent little thrills of adrenaline through him as he said it.
(#) destinationdestroya 2012-04-06 09:56:02 AMOh lord, I'm so into this story that I have to resist the urge to google what Gerard did and then I have to convince myself it's not real. This story is brilliant, honesty, I feel like I'm actually inside of it, like inside Frank's head. Amazing piece of writing, keep up the good work!
Author's responseWow, thank you so much- I'm so glad it seems real- I wasn't sure I was pulling that off okay. That's so nice to hear, thank you for taking the time to review- it means a lot :D
(#) Echelonfrommars 2012-04-06 11:35:33 AMFrank has gotten the first taste of the wonderful thing that is rebellion and punk ;D Nice ^^ Seriously though,you're such an amazing author,I could really FEEL Frank's excitement. You're just-wow- :) And I really liked the last poem ;)
Author's responseHe has indeed ;D Awww, thank you so much, that means so much to hear! THANK YOU :D
- I love this so much, it's so intriguing, I just want to know more and more!!
I am in love with that poem, it's simply amazing and probably one of my favourites even though it's from a fic!
Please update soon! I must read more of this marvel!
Author's responseThen I'll write more and more xD Thank you so much, I've gone all stupid and smiley :'D You're so sweet, thanks for reviewing!
(#) Heymimusic 2012-04-06 02:54:12 PMThis was just amazing. Wait, screw the just part, it's amazingness cannot be calculated. I can't wait to see what happens at the gig! :D and nice song titles and poem, I loved them :)
Author's responseAwwww, thank you so much! :'D You shall find out soon ;D Thanks for such a lovely review!
- Sweetheart, this might be a masterpiece. Seriously. There is nothing worrying (that isn't meant to be worrying) as of yet, and the potential for greatness is huge. I don't know exactly where you're going to end up, but I do know that that's where I want to be. This is going to be awesome.
I liked how Frank's girlfriend is a total wuss, I like that Ray has a bit of an edge while still fitting in with Frank's normal crowd, and I adore Robbie. As long as he doesn't become an absolute asshat later in the story he could be one of the better OC's that I've seen. Is the band that Frank is going to see real?
Thank you so, so much for writing and posting this chapter. You are a complete pleasure to read every time. Happy Easter!!
Author's responseOh my god, this review actually made my day- thank you so much! I am seriously excited about this story, so I'm glad people seem to be liking it :D And don't worry, I'm not planning on making Robbie and asshat :L No, I made the band and song titles up xD
THANK YOU so much for giving such a lovely review- I always look forward to your reviews :D
Happy Easter to you too!
- I love it so MUCH. I love the story line, I love the poems (you seriously rock at those), I love Frank, I love Robbie and aw it's really awesome.
Author's responseThank you so much, I'm glad you like it! Eeee, thanks for such a lovely review :'D
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-04-07 03:39:50 AMThis is so different from usual stuff but I'm absolutely hooked. It's brilliant, I know I've said it before but the writing is sososo good and I just love the way you portray Frank's character. I also really like the poems you incorporate into it, they're absolutely beautiful as well.
Update soon, can't wait to find out what happens to Frank at the gig!
Author's responseYay :D Thank you so much, that means a lot to hear! And I'm glad you like the poems- I'm not too confident about them yet. I shall update as soon as I can...thanks for the awesome review and constantly sticking with my stories :'D