(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-08This was adorable! I loved how you described Mikey through Frank's eyes. Great story, hope you update soon!
Author's responseThank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I'm actually finding it hard to describe Mikey from Franks POV so I'm happy that you think it was okay. I hope to have a chapter up tonight again. Thank you for leaving a review!
(#) tortillachip 2012-04-08Another great chapter! I love how Mikey was just introduced, but you can already tell that he has been through a lot. Frank really seems genuine and helpful and already seems to care about Mikey, though he doesn't exactly know him yet. I can't wait to see more!
Author's responseI'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Frank is a very nice guy and it's one of his traits to help people so he definitely wants to help Mikey. I think I will have a chapter up tonight. Thank you so much for leaving a lovely review.
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-09I really loved this chapter and the way you portrayed Mikey's character. Mikey seems to be really vulnerable and emotionally scarred, do I can't wait to see how Frank gains his trust. I'm intrigued as to what had Gerard angry when he went into his bedroom. It made me melt a little inside the way Gerard was protective and gentle with Mikey; it was adorable! Great job and I really can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's responseWow, I'm so so happy you liked this chapter. I am actually finding it difficult to portray Mikey through Franks eyes so I'm glad you liked it. Mikey is quite vulnerable right now so it will be hard for Frank to gain his trust. The thing that made Gerard angry isn't very big but does add alot to Mikey's depression. I hope to get more protectiveness from Gerard throughout the chapters. Thank you for leaving such a nice review. I should have another chapter up tonight!
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