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Chapter Eighteen

by CosmicZombie 20 Reviews

'But that’s the thing. I don’t think I hate him. I don’t think I hate him at all...'

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2012/04/11 - Updated: 2012/04/20 - 6110 words


  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) amos222 2012-04-11 07:44:58 PM

    Wow. This story is always getting increasingly amazing. Your Gerard is heart wrenchingly perfect and I love Frank's changing views on him and the way you're slowly revealing more of his hidden personality. When I go to review your chapters, everything I wanted to let you know about while I was reading goes out of my mind and I feel like all I can think of is how the heck you'll top this chapter with the next update. I can't wait for the next chapter. I am so excited about this concert thing, because I feel like some really splendid shit is about to hit the fan and that's the stuff that I adore. I also hope that we can learn more about Gerard's past and why he has such issues with Frank's music in the next chapter. Thank you do much for writing this and please update again soon. I might die of you don't. (No pressure). Also, and I hate to be picky about great stories written by my favorite author, but close to the beginning of the chapter you had a lot of "to"s where grammatically there should have been "too"s
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) DangerousAmber 2012-04-11 10:16:47 PM

    He like, stood up to Gerard

    Amazingly amazing brilliant chapter, it was so intense and just amazing.

    Xo Danger ♪

    Author's response

    He did indeed xD
    Thank you, that really means a lot...I'm glad you thought so- thanks so much for taking the time to review! :)
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) GeorgiaMCRlover 2012-04-12 03:57:49 AM


    Author's response

    THANK YOU! That's seriously so sweet :'D I'll update as soon as I can!
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) xXDeathwishXx 2012-04-12 10:57:57 AM

    Why the fuck are you so good at writing?! You are so fucking talented,seriously:o
    Loved this chapter,I get the feeling from now on things are going to get very interesting...Mmm.
    My friends and family think I'm a freak because I'm addicted to Frerard fan fiction. They think it's all gay sex and shit..But no,that's not what it is with your writing. You have storylines that are so unique,exciting and original:).
    Update very soon please,I need this story like I need food and water:'3.
    -E x

    Author's response

    Awwwww, thank you so fucking much, honey! This review brightened my day :'D Yesss, I think things may become very interesting from now on ;D
    Thank you so much, that's a brilliant compliment- I try and make sure there's a proper storyline and everything, so I'm glad it's appreciated :D
    Thanks for such a sweet, lovely review- I'll update as soon as I can!
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) aweirdtree 2012-04-13 11:44:23 AM

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    OHMYGOD! this was just soooo fucking amazing, again! thank you! god, i'm so addicted to this story - your writing just improves every time i read a new chapter. and the plot is great! oh gosh... i feel so sorry for them all. but Mikey is awesome, god, i love that kid ^^ and yeah... this is incredible (:

    and btw, what does your user name stand for? i've often wondered where you picked it up... :D

    Author's response

    THANK YOU SO MUCH! Sorry, I've had a shit day and this review just really put a smile on my face, thank you :D I love Mikey too xD I'm so glad you like it and thanks so much for taking the time to review, it means a lot! :)

    I made my username up, though my friends used to call me 'zombie', cause I have really pale skin and wear smudgy re/ black eyeliner and hardly ever sleep, just run on coffee so they thought I looked undead xD and then I thought up the Cosmic bit because I'm interested in everything- my friends used to laugh at me because I like to ask questions about everything! :L

    Don't know if that made any sense..hope it did :L

    CosmicZombie xo
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) SummerShock 2012-04-15 01:32:34 AM

    You're killing me woman! Yet another amazing chapter. You're seriously making me despise Gerard, but want to cuddle him at the same time :/ You write sooo spectacularly

    Author's response

    Ahh, don't die D; Thank yooou! Yeah, I kinda feel like that towards him too...xD Thanks for reviewing! :D
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) kirrahdiviney 2012-04-15 04:41:26 AM

    This chapter was amazing, as per usual.
    You should definately update soon xxx

    Author's response

    Aww, thanks honey :'D
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) tabbyknightley 2012-04-15 03:29:26 PM


    Author's response

    THANK YOU! :'D
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) CatscanFlyy 2012-04-18 12:45:09 PM

    This chapter had me on edge. Is it weird that I really like violent Gerard? Haha it's great to see how differently you can write his character I mean just look at YBMD compared to this and the difference is mental xD
    Ocean is a complete babe too I want her to be my kick ass best friend
    I also really loved the bit about the rain and peoples bottled up tears it was really poetic C:
    Can't wait for an update! xD

    Author's response

    Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice review :D
  • Trying To Escape The Inevitable

    (#) LydiaWay 2012-05-27 12:01:42 AM

    'the image of him lying, "broken and defeated", at Danny’s feet' OMFG black parade lyrics;D and awww i thought they'd make up :(xxx

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