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Fair

by Lady-Anarane 3 Reviews

A becoming but mysterious woman watches over none but Captain Jack Sparrow.

Category: Pirates of the Caribbean - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Jack, Other - Warnings: [V] [X] - Published: 2006/07/02 - Updated: 2006/07/02 - 2081 words

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  • Fair

    (#) Pink_Rapid 2006-07-09 03:37:45 AM

    Interesting, I can't wait for you to update.

    If I have any constructive criticism about the writing itself, it's that you may want to prolong the emotional effect Andie feels when coming in to contact with Jack. It seems more real that way.

    In any case, I hope you update soon!
  • Fair

    (#) SpiritArcher 2006-07-27 02:54:11 AM

    How unique (: I enjoyed the story, especially since the OC is powerful in her own way. Jack also seems to be IC as well, which is a very good thing. (:
  • Fair

    (#) Ithilwen 2007-06-14 06:36:41 PM

    Walk carefully. She's pretty and mysterious, you mentioned her clothing and her hair, and her name has a Y in it. This isn't quite setting off my Sue-dar, but it's walking the tripwire. Nice vivid scene, though. I could see the toss of her head in Tortuga.

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