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just sleep

by jack-the-ripper 3 Reviews

So do we take turns or what?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Fantasy,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2012/04/14 - Updated: 2012/04/14 - 1422 words

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  • cause love isn't about affection, it's about leadership

    (#) Two_19 2012-04-15 04:39:19 PM

    I got a few emails today saying you updated so I thought there were more chapters but there aren't and this makes me sad. Please keep updating!

    Author's response

    oh, i'm sorry! I was actually just going through the chapter and correcting a couple typos that were annoying the living shit out of me. sorry about the false alarm lol. i'll put up a new chapter right now!
  • cause love isn't about affection, it's about leadership

    (#) CarcinoGeneticist 2013-08-08 02:42:30 AM

    The fact that you used the phrase "Lazy ass" instead of hyphenating it is actually hilarious.
    When it's non-hyphenated, you are using the word 'ass' as an adjective.
    You just described them as butt people. DON'T CHANGE IT IT'S PERFECT EVERYWHERE.

    Author's response

    oh wow... what can you respond to a review like this?
    Sorry?
    You're welcome?
    ... I don't know. Lazy-ass is something that I say all the time and I never thought of it that way. Huh. I think it's safe to say that often when I write, I don't pay attention to how you can't type everything down the way it would come out of your mouth, you know?
    I guess I could call them butt people, although it has that tiny little homosexual ring to it. Butt people. Nevermind, I like that!
  • cause love isn't about affection, it's about leadership

    (#) CarcinoGeneticist 2013-08-08 02:46:14 AM

    And good save on the plural possessive others'. Srsly, nobody does that.
    Except for you.
    So I commend you, you writer you.

    Author's response

    * bows *

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