Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > cause love isn't about affection, it's about leadership
- I got a few emails today saying you updated so I thought there were more chapters but there aren't and this makes me sad. Please keep updating!
Author's responseoh, i'm sorry! I was actually just going through the chapter and correcting a couple typos that were annoying the living shit out of me. sorry about the false alarm lol. i'll put up a new chapter right now!
(#) CarcinoGeneticist 2013-08-08The fact that you used the phrase "Lazy ass" instead of hyphenating it is actually hilarious.
When it's non-hyphenated, you are using the word 'ass' as an adjective.
You just described them as butt people. DON'T CHANGE IT IT'S PERFECT EVERYWHERE.
Author's responseoh wow... what can you respond to a review like this?
... I don't know. Lazy-ass is something that I say all the time and I never thought of it that way. Huh. I think it's safe to say that often when I write, I don't pay attention to how you can't type everything down the way it would come out of your mouth, you know?
I guess I could call them butt people, although it has that tiny little homosexual ring to it. Butt people. Nevermind, I like that!
(#) CarcinoGeneticist 2013-08-08And good save on the plural possessive others'. Srsly, nobody does that.
Except for you.
So I commend you, you writer you.
Author's response* bows *
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