"We have a Patrick Stump." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-15 03:07:39 PMBrilliant. This is just absolutely amazing so far already! It definitley isn't dull. It kept my attention the whole time. Pete does seem like a creep but I can sort of tell he is alreading wanting to care for Mikey. I hope him and Gerard can work things out. This has just... blown my mind!!! I really love your writing. It just keeps me waiting for more and it's so interesting. I cant wait for more so please update soon before I die by withdrawal symptoms! :)
Author's responseThank you very much! I'm really relieved that you don't think this is dull as that was one of my main worries. Pete is a bit of a creep, but a sweet creep nonetheless.
I'll try to have the next chapter up tomorrow night; I aim for a chapter a day if possible.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-15 04:20:53 PMThis was really sad at first, then really adorable! It was s cute how Pete just said that Mikey was pretty. This totally made my day! Hope you update soon!
Author's responseThank you very much, glad you thought it was adorable! I'll try my best to update tonight.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :D
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-16 05:55:54 AMOh wow! This isn't dull or dragged out at all! You need to stop apologizing for your stories, trust us, they are incredible :)
I love Patrick so much, I just want to hug him and never let him go because he is so caring, and fluffy, and the fact that his parents didn't love him and that is why he cares so much for others just makes him so much more lovable :)
And Pete? Ha ha ha, he is so funny, his weird fixation with Mikey :)
I hope Mikey gets better soon, and I am earerly awaiting the next chapter!
Well done :)
Author's responseThank you very much, I'm sooo relieved that you think this is alright! :D
I'm glad you think that Patrick's lovable, that's what I was aiming for with his character. I wanted him to be kind of like the fairy godmother; all caring and fluffy. ;P
Yes, Pete's fixation with Mikey is a little weird. Then again though, I'd probably be the same in his presence.
The next chapter will definitely be up later tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-04-16 12:45:09 PMOh god Pete is going to be a handful :D and yaaaay angry brotherly protective Gerard! -fist pump- this story kicks ass so far and has completely grabbed my attention can't wait for more!
Author's responseYes, I think that Pete most likely is. Glad you're liking the brotherly awesomeness of Gerard; there's definitely going to be a lot more of that.
Thank you very much! :D